We had quit epositive feedback from Debbie during tutorials, sheparticularly liked the fact that our idea was fairly simple, which is a good for a short 5minute film.
Debbie suggested drawing out a
timeline, so we can see the structure of the piece.We also will need to
be aware of pace and movement within the piece.
We were warned not to use too many
flashbacks, as too much within a 5 minute film can distort the films perspective.
Our 3 structure narrative:
-Gambling and his
old life with his family
-Him being kicked out of his family
home
-Becoming homeless, the reveal that he is homeless
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