Portrait of Place - A 2nd attempt?

Sooo, we got a chance to look at our rushes from Thursdays shoot today and they're terrible. For a start, the exposure is not good on many of the shots at all and secondly, our main concept (to do sped up Rambler's POV shots for most of the film) just doesnt work. Perhaps if either myself or Jess were better skilled with a camera, or if we were able to use some form of camera grips we might have be able to pull off the effect, unfortunately we had neither.

Back to the drawing board:

So here's a quick storyboard of what we could do instead: